Do u like a story?

hi,

once upon a time , there was a pretty girl live in the small country ............
she said that .........
when i was child, i like fariy tail .Sometimes i think that angles are living in my house and
town too. i believe angles and i afarid devil.
but she love cats and fishes.when she become teenage,she has many friend.
One day, she see one handsome boy.Later, the boy and she are become a friend.
But she meets the first love for her fast time meet.
she dreams are become failure 'coz the boy who love her is not love him.she know that he has many male friend and many girlfriend . Sometimes she feels give up anything 'coz of her poor life.
Time is gone by gone , Season is changing and changing. The day in the day out,
the boy and her life are changing and changing.
The strange thing is that she still love him, but she don't want to find an answer.
but her boy know anything yet.
The sad day is comin. the boy is leaving her life without say goodbye.
she think that "i think i become mad when he leave me". but she believe that
the boy is coming for her life one day
She is still waiting for him .

well , the stroy is finished.
how do u think of that story?
I wanna know your suggesstion.
bye now.